Some people say that the main environmental problem of our times is the loss particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems.  Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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era, atmospheric predicaments become more serious than any other. Due to
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issue related to
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has been
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a loss
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of flora and fauna in today times. Contrarily, some
echellons
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of society reckon that atmosphere has suffered from other problems
also
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shows
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that
currently
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world
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is losing its main biodiversity in the form of plants and animals.
Initially
,
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man started hunting for making money,
as a result
, loss of many
species
of fauna. occur. Take elephant,
for example
, an animal
species
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book due to its escalating hunting level for its tooth which is used in making jewellery. Adding more, by increasing demand of homes deforestation occur ought to
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, many
species
of plants are on the verge of extinction.
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are more serious than the extinction of biodiversity.
Firstly
, pollution is becoming
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concern it
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more harm than
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hunting.
Although
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threat to the environment. Adding more, global warming is
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another predicament which is faced globally nowadays. Even though
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increase the temperature of the earth
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a result,
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of glacier n which keep the earth hot day by day. To conclude, no doubt, extinction of useful
species
of flora and fauna degrade the environment and disturb the ecological balance but other issues related to pollution and ecosystem is more dangerous than
this
which can not be denied.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem services
  • genetic diversity
  • food chains
  • climate change
  • habitat destruction
  • pollution
  • overpopulation
  • deforestation
  • water scarcity
  • holistic approach
  • environmental sustainability
  • irreversible loss
  • threatened species
  • conservation efforts
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