Some people think that zoos are cruel and all zoos should be closed. However, some people think zoo can help protect animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

There is no doubt that zoological gardens play an important role to preserve wild

species

.

However

, while some believe that they pose a threat to

animals

and

they

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should be shut down, I believe with those who argue that

zoos

are establishments that protect them.

To begin

with, wildlife sanctuaries are unethical places.

This

is because a plethora of wild mammals

are

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kept in cages all day long rather than spending time in their natural habitats.

This

means that

zoos

frequently offer little room for them to enjoy their freedom in total autonomy.

Besides

,

animals

parks sometimes jeopardize the welfare of many specimens. As they tend to live

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their own,

this

environment is highly likely to put their well-being at stake,

thus

increasing their feeling of isolation and boredom.

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Nevertheless

,

zoos

can benefit

animals

in many ways.

For instance

, animal activists protect endangered

species

from wildlife trafficking. Considering that poaching is an illegal trade, zoologists do their utmost to prevent

animals

from being attacked, injured and killed by

such

predators. Another significant advantage of

zoos

is that vets and scientists could make research on the spread of certain viruses that

animals

might carry. If

such

epidemy is tackled rapidly thanks to scientific analysis,

this

would

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the spread of hazardous diseases,

therefore

protecting a wide range of

species

. To conclude,

although

zoos

are considered

as

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cruel places for

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lack

of

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empathy and care with regards to their residents, it is of

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critical importance to keep them open as it enables many

species

to feel protected and healthy.