Some people think that zoos are cruel and all zoos should be closed. However, some people think zoo can help protect animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

There is no doubt that zoological gardens play an important role to preserve wild

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, while some believe that they pose a threat to

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should be shut down, I believe with those who argue that

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are establishments that protect them.

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with, wildlife sanctuaries are unethical places.

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is because a plethora of wild mammals

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kept in cages all day long rather than spending time in their natural habitats.

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means that

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frequently offer little room for them to enjoy their freedom in total autonomy.

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,

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parks sometimes jeopardize the welfare of many specimens. As they tend to live

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their own,

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environment is highly likely to put their well-being at stake,

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increasing their feeling of isolation and boredom.

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Nevertheless

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can benefit

animals

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in many ways.

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, animal activists protect endangered

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from wildlife trafficking. Considering that poaching is an illegal trade, zoologists do their utmost to prevent

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from being attacked, injured and killed by

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predators. Another significant advantage of

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is that vets and scientists could make research on the spread of certain viruses that

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might carry. If

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epidemy is tackled rapidly thanks to scientific analysis,

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the spread of hazardous diseases,

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protecting a wide range of

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. To conclude,

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are considered

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cruel places for

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lack

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empathy and care with regards to their residents, it is of

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critical importance to keep them open as it enables many

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to feel protected and healthy.