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Accidents are common on roads. What are the causes of this problem? Can you speculate the effects of this phenomenon and how could the frequency of accidents be reduced?

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Accidents
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 are becoming an increasing and common phenomenon on
roads
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. Where many people are dying every year.
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,
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 paper will be discussed and outlined the
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 of
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 problem as well as the effects
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 issue brings to society. The
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 of disasters on
roads
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 can vary with many different conditions,
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 the main cause is cars.
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, we can
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 outline motorcyclists, cyclists and pedestrians who
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 use
roads
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 and
also
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 can be involved in
accidents
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.
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, there are many things that can generate
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 and bring death
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 as alcoholism, the usage of mobile phones while driving and long trips without taking a break, leading drivers to sleep while driving, unfortunately, living their cars without control on
roads
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. If these
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 were tackled directly, could reduce the number of
accidents
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 exponentially.
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, to reduce the frequency of
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 on
roads
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 there are different actions that need to be done and implemented by the government and locals.
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, the local authority could advertise drivers and pedestrians about the dangers of the road as well as increase signalization and penalities if motorists or any other user got caught not following the rules.
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, penalties are not always the best approach,
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, in Germany the local authorities placed rubber strips on the
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 layer in
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 a way that when motorists drive through them music is played by the tires of the car rolling through the strips of the road, making, as a result, the drive awake.
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, there are many different things that can be done by the government and the users of the road to reduce
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.
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, there is not the perfect formula to know is the best way to know the
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 of
accidents
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 on
roads
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 much less how to reduce them. At
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 point, we discussed the
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 of
accidents
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, and how to reduce them. In conclusion, as mentioned before, there are many different places very different from each other,
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, the best approach to reduce
accidents
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 is having a massive intervention by the government.

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  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

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  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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