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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

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Computers and their applications have a huge impact on our daily lives because of their utmost
benefits
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. In the past, it was difficult to store and retrieve
information
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 and papers were used widely for
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 purpose. In
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 contemporary world,
information
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technology
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 has made
one
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's life easy both at work and home. There are some disadvantages of IT which are related to the memorization skills of people, but overall I believe the
benefits
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are completely outweigh
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 its demerits.
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 of the main advantages of
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technology
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 is the storage of
information
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. Not only
one
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 can store
information
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 on computers, phones and the like, but
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 can
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 access the
data
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 from anywhere in the world.
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 is mostly done by cloud storage which is an
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 system and stores
information
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 online for unlimited time.
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, the process of uploading and downloading any
data
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 is not time-consuming because of the fast internet services around the globe.
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, not only
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technology
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 is used by professionals but
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 individuals use
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 for their daily chores.
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, women write down their notes on the phone for grocery items, adults track their daily exercise routine through various apps on the phone and businesses store their invoices on the computer.
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, people do not have to memorize
information
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 anymore due to
technology
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.
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 is the other benefit of
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technology
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 as all their
information
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 and
data
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 is just
one
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 click away.
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, there are some arguments that because of
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 the skill of an individual to memorise something has affected us because too much relaxation to the brain leads to memory problems.
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,
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 can be achieved by various means
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 as playing computer games, exercises, cardboard games and the like.
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,there are some concerns regarding the privacy of the
data
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 which can be solved by strong passwords. In conclusion, there are many
benefits
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 of
information
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technology
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 including storage and easy access to
data
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 from anywhere in the world. In my opinion, the
benefits
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 of IT has completely outweighed its disadvantages as the overall impact of IT is positive in our lives.
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