Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

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, the issue of receiving entrance fees for

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has become a considerable

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throughout the fast-changing world. Some argue that doing

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trend brings countless benefits for countries. Having said that, I completely agree with the given assertion based on some compelling reasons. To date,

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play a pivotal role among people’s communities and there is a direct relationship between these spots and human lifestyles, religions, traditions and to name but a few.

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, protection of them is the most important responsibility of authorities. To put it in the nutshell, preserving

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historical heritage requires daunting expenditure providing

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it is demanding/ irritating. As the amount of money allocated by governments and non-profit organizations are negligible, they customarily suffer from

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budgeting,

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, from an economic point of view,

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notion can cater a handsome income for local nations which is spent by provinces.

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, some opponents dispute that if the money is received by decision-makers of

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, fewer people would visit these places,

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idea is fallacious.

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, art lovers always pay

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for their enthusiasm.

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, once they pay the/a cost, they cherish what they visit.

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, from a psychological point of view,

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trend plays a positive role in the visitors’ minds.

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least is that according to the empirical experiences of some countries

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as Iran by carrying out research and distribution questioners among people has prevented that just under 10

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of them have paid attention to the

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fees and others have taken rest contributors including facilities, advertisements, history of stuff and so on. On the basis of above mentioned, people are hopefully convinced that with the given

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,

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trend might have some disadvantages, a vast majority of benefits can be accounted

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as formidable income, protected

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and so on.