It is possible to help all people in the world, so governments should only focus on people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Due to globalization,

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communication between different countries

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been easier than

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present time.

However

, one aspect

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particular, is highly concerned which is

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. It is a sensitive topic and there is an argument whether governments should focus on their citizens or not

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First

of all, it is undeniably

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efficient

to concern only population in their own countries. By limiting

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of people, a higher distribution of natural resources can be expected,

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, famine and drought have less chance of

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occurring

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.

For example

, in Bhutan, they have only

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thousands

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of people so their resources of

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and water

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more than enough for everyone.

Furthermore

, thanks to similar cultural

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, it is convenient to set laws and regulations as most of them would have the same idea.

On the other hand

, expanding scopes of

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can be beneficial in terms of exchanging

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and

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cooperation between countries. For illustration, Thailand and America conduct

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military training annually together to share techniques from their own

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and experiences.

Therefore

, a strong connection between nations is certainly a promised backup plan for each of them in case of an emergency situation where they can exchange knowledge or goods with each other. In conclusion, both perspectives have their own benefits and drawbacks. Evidently,

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idea of maintaining

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relationship

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between nations as the good points outweigh the disadvantages.