You exercise regularly and have been a member of many different gyms. Recently, you moved into a new neighbourhood and joined a new gym. You have noticed that people at this gym do not bother to wipe down the machines after use and often leave dirty towels on the benches in the change rooms. Write to the gym manager.

Dear
Mr.
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Koto, My name is Joe Carry, I recently joined your
gym
"the royal fitness". I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with the
behavior
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of the
gym
mates. I am a businessman by profession and felt immensely happy that I found your
gym
which is close to my new home. I work out regularly and spending time at the
gym
relaxes me more from my stressful work life. As per my opinion, the
gym
has to be more hygienic and tidier because it is the place where people spend their quality time on body fitness. My
first
impression was a little depressing as the machines were not properly cleaned and after use, it is kept untidy.
Furthermore
, the dirty towels are dropped down on the benches inadvertently. None of them
are
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vigilant about their actions and recklessness may cause severe health issues for every member. Considering these issues, I would like to suggest you develop and implement policies and guidelines for
gym
workings and members should adhere to follow these instructions.
Also
, regular staff inspections should be there so that all members will be aware of their
behavior
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.
Thus
, you can maintain an appropriate decorum to the
gym
and the members like me will be interested to come over daily to work out. I hope you would consider my suggestions. Yours Sincerely, John
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