The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea. What are the reasons and solutions?

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We have seen various articles stating how some
animals
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have changed over the recent decades in shapes and sizes, how some of them have been categorised as endangered species and how some of them have totally disappeared. One significant reason
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threatening
animals
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is
pollution
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and we have to follow the 3Rs to lessen it.
Pollution
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is causing serious harm to the
animals
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that live on land as well as in
water
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. Various activities that we do unconsciously are contributing to air
pollution
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, soil
pollution
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and
water
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pollution
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.
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, it poisons the food that
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feed on or worsens their habitat.
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, the insecticide
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used in farming is made of harmful chemicals. When it is spread on the crops, the residue, that still contains poisonous chemicals, seeps into the soil. It gets into the underground
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network and flows into streams and rivers and pollutes the
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where various fishes live. It causes genetic changes to the aquatic
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or even kills them ultimately, causing extinction. Reducing, reusing and recycling can help to reduce
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effectively. Environmental activists are campaigning people to follow
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3Rs rule to save
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and humans alike.
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, we have seen the increased use, or rather, overuse of plastic in the past few years, as it is widely available at extremely economical prices.
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, we have seen photos of aquatic
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as well as land
animals
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that consume these plastic
bags
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in search of food which eventually lead them to their dead as it cannot be digested. If we could replace the use of plastic
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with either biodegradable paper
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or reusable cotton
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, we will not need to throw them into the sea. To summarise, a key factor contributing to the extinction of some animal species is
pollution
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. If we start to take
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matter seriously and put in our best effort to tackle
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problem, I strongly believe that we could save the helpless
animals
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from extinction.
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