The charts show what UK graduate and post graduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
The given bar charts illustrate information on graduated and post-graduate
students
in the UK after finishing university if they did not work
full-time. Overall
, a glance at the charts reveals that different variations are evident. It can be clearly observed that the number
of post-graduate students
who did part-time work
was by
far more than graduates.
As Change preposition
apply
it
can be seen in the first chart, Correct pronoun usage
apply
further
study shows the most significant number
(29665) while
only 3500 students
tend to do voluntary work
. Graduate students
who did the
part-time job were 17735, and unemployed graduated Correct article usage
apply
students
were 16235.
In the second
chart, 2535 post-graduates did part-time work
while
only 345 had a tendency to work
voluntarily. Two thousand seven hundred forty-five students
decided to continue their education, and 1625 post-graduates were unemployed.
In summary, the total number
of graduate students
in 2008 was 30,000; however
, the total number
of post-graduates was 3,000.Submitted by TUTOO on
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