The charts show what UK graduate and post graduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

The charts show what UK graduate and post graduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
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The given bar charts illustrate information on graduated and post-graduate
students
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in the UK after finishing university if they did not
work
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full-time.
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, a glance at the charts reveals that different variations are evident. It can be clearly observed that the
number
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of post-graduate
students
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who did part-time
work
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was
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far more than graduates. As
it
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can be seen in the first chart,
further
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study shows the most significant
number
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(29665)
while
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only 3500
students
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tend to do voluntary
work
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. Graduate
students
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who did
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part-time job were 17735, and unemployed graduated
students
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were 16235. In the
second
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chart, 2535 post-graduates did part-time
work
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while
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only 345 had a tendency to
work
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voluntarily. Two thousand seven hundred forty-five
students
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decided to continue their education, and 1625 post-graduates were unemployed. In summary, the total
number
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of graduate
students
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in 2008 was 30,000;
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, the total
number
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of post-graduates was 3,000.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, work, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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