The charts show what UK graduate and post graduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

The charts show what UK graduate and post graduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
The given bar charts illustrate information on graduated and post-graduate
students
in the UK after finishing university if they did not
work
full-time.
Overall
, a glance at the charts reveals that different variations are evident. It can be clearly observed that the
number
of post-graduate
students
who did part-time
work
was
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far more than graduates. As
it
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can be seen in the first chart,
further
study shows the most significant
number
(29665)
while
only 3500
students
tend to do voluntary
work
. Graduate
students
who did
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part-time job were 17735, and unemployed graduated
students
were 16235. In the
second
chart, 2535 post-graduates did part-time
work
while
only 345 had a tendency to
work
voluntarily. Two thousand seven hundred forty-five
students
decided to continue their education, and 1625 post-graduates were unemployed. In summary, the total
number
of graduate
students
in 2008 was 30,000;
however
, the total
number
of post-graduates was 3,000.
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