In many countries, the government prioritises economic growth above all other concerns. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

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growth of

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the economy

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should be considered as the

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priority for the

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policy makers

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. The main benefits of

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are

lower

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unemployment rate and the development of international trade.

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, the key drawbacks are

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environment and

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lifestyle.  It cannot be denied that to enhance the financial situation, governments need to provide more career opportunities for everyone in order to lessen the number of unemployed. They have to prevent their population from being jobless because

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is a major obstacle

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the development of

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the national

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economy. If

people

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have suitable jobs, they will have enough money to increase spending on things they desire which is one of the effective approaches to stimulate economic growth.

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,

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policy

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improve

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sales's

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productivity

especially

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,especially

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export products.

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makes

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apply

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better progress in trading by reducing

tax

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taxes

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and

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encouraging

people

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to run more businesses.

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,

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year when the Thai government decided to broaden their international trade, there was a

significant

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increasing

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rate in exported products.

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, when the state's priority is

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the economy

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, their

policy

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is not

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about the effects on the environment. The development of industrial factories brings more pollution to the community. A huge amount of carbon dioxide emitted from the manufacturing plants not only destroy the earth's atmosphere but

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increase temperature.

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,

people

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tend to face more health problems because they have to work overtime for making more money in order to support their government's

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. They have less time for exercise or relaxation.

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, in Bangkok even though

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average amount of income is higher,

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are suffering from being stressed. In conclusion, putting economic growth as the

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priority not only decrease the number of unemployed but

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expanding

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the national trade.

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,

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endangers the environment and destroy

people

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work life

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balance.