The differences between countries are becoming less and less evident, as people all over the world wear the same fashions, use the same brands, have similar eating habits and watch the same TV channels. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?

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Due to globalization all
people
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across the globe are using the same products and following
same
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the same
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fashion according to
latest
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trend
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. In
past
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people
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have their own traditional dress and use products which are manufactured in their own
country
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.But due to
liberalisation
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the liberalisation
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of government policies in trade if the product is made
any where
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we can purchase the item while living in
other
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another country
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country
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easily. Even most
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foreign
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the foreign
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countries are shipping online as
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a customer
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customer
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customers
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can order it from any
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just by giving
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their
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address.
People
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eating habits
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changed in recent times due to
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number of restaurants emerging in all countries. when
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am young we
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find any burgers or noodles in our city.But from past ten
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many international brands entered the market and made their
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food available to
people
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living in
anouther
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another
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.Even
peoplecan
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people can
watch all channels all over the
world
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through dish connection.Many clothing brands are available all over the
world
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In my ,opinion advantages outweigh disadvantages.As the
world
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is well integrated through
internet
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we can watch movies through Netflix by sitting anywhere in the
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.Fashion
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is not restricted within a
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boundary.
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every
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have
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their own customs and traditions. But due to
globalisation
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many
people
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are forgetting their own customs.Films are internationally released
people
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are driving their attention to
such
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foreign films.More
people
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are knowledgeable about
foreign
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the foreign
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way
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of living than they are about their own culture. To conclude, As all the countries are well integrated these days merits outweigh drawbacks.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global community
  • interconnectedness
  • cultural exchange
  • global brands
  • economic benefits
  • shared prosperity
  • cultural identity
  • cultural diversity
  • environmental impact
  • local customs
  • local businesses
  • economic difficulties
  • adaptation
  • culture shock
  • dominance
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