Environmental problems are serious in many countries. It means that the only possible way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

A lot of pollution is created due to reckless methods of manufacturing and
this
has caused serious damage to the
environment
. It is believed by many people that the best way to control
this
situation is to have collective efforts of all the
countries
in the
world
and I have complete agreement with
this
idea because
this
problem could only be solved if each and every country's emission rate is kept in check.
First
, rules and regulations should be made internationally to cap the emission rate of every country in the
world
. Every country in the
world
must be liable to abide by the rules set up by international organisations and any nation not carrying out industrial
activities
- or any sort of
activities
that could cause harm to the
environment
- should be taxed regressively. Currently,
for example
, the problem is only some
countries'
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, mostly the developed ones, industrial
activities
are kept in check by the international bodies. And
hence
the atmosphere-damaging manufacturing processes of many developing and underdeveloped
countries
go unnoticed.
Therefore
, an international system of taxing
countries
that spread pollution in huge amounts should be constituted.
However
, it seems perfectly fair to keep an eye on the number of poisonous gases spread by developed
countries
in the
world
since most pollutants are emitted by industries, that are in huge numbers in these nations, only. But just monitoring the production
activities
of developed
countries
will not work, developing and underdeveloped
countries
should be backed internationally too since these are the nations with fewer resources and finances that could help them out in controlling the level of carbon emission.
For instance
, maybe about 60% of the factories in all the developing and underdeveloped
countries
collectively in the
world
have the old mechanisms of producing goods and services.
Hence
, somewhat support gained internationally could aid in improving the production procedures of these nations. In conclusion, in order to bring out some improvement in the overall condition of the
environment
, collective efforts are needed. Every nation in the
world
should be carrying out its industrial
activities
in a way that harms the
environment
minimally.
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