Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.Other say that there are more important enviromental problem. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some have the opinion that the extinction of certain
species
of
plants
and
animals
is the main environmental problem of our time.
While
others are of an option that there are more significant environmental problems
besides
this
.In
this
,essay we will discuss both options in detail. On the one hand ,
issues
like wiping out certain
species
of
plants
and
animals
can disrupt the whole food chain.
This
can cause some cascading effects and the result like
increase
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an increase
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in
pollution
of other
species
or wiping out of some
species
.Which can be either good or bad.An example of
such
extension is
of
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dinosaurs
lead
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to the emergence of humans.So the effect on the
environmental
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by
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this
problem cannot be certain.These
issues
can be
threat
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a threat
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to creatin
species
of
plants
and
animals
but not all ecosystems.
But
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on the other hand
,
issues
like global warming , air
pollution
etc. are
treath
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affecting
so entire ecosystem.
This
issue if not handled can extend all the life of the planet.
Issues
like global warming can cause
melting
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the melting
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of ice which can lead to
submerge
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the submerging
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of various lifeforms living on the land resulting in
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extinction of
species
surviving on land.Air
pollution
is the root
causes
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cause
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of many health
issues
not only in humans but
also
in other
animals
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species
.
Plants
are
also
dying out
due to
this
issues
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issue
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.Water
pollution
is
the
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a
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threat to entire marine life.These
issues
are at a global scale
which
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needs
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more attention because are not only a
threath
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threat
to the entire lifecycle of
animals
and
plants
on the earth. In conclusion,
Although
wiping out certain
plants
and
animals
are
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is
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problematic to the
enviroment
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environment
it is limited to a small number of
species
.
While environmental
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Environmental
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problems like global warming ,air and water
pollution
etc. may cause the extinction of
the
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apply
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entire life on the earth.
This
issue needs to be taken more seriously.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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