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In the picture below shows the recycling process of wasted glass bottles.

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The process illustrates how waste mirror bottles become capable of use. Overall, there are three stages that describe all picture and begin with collecting wasted glass bottles and ends with a ready product for sale.
Initially
, all utilized vials are delivered to the collection point and transformed to another place. In the
second
 stage, I urns wash up with high-pressured water. After that, the class sort out by different colours like brown, green or clear.
Next
, bottles supplied to the tumbler factory were glass has broken up into pieces and those little Pisces burns in a furnace under high temperature. Admittedly, new liquid cups and recycled liquid drinks are mixed up and moulted in a bottle shape.
Finally
, glasses are bottled and delivered to supermarkets as ready for sale products.
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