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Students should be taught academic knowledge so that they can pass exams, and skills such as cooking or dressing should not be taught. To what extent do you agree/disagree?

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There is a widely-held belief that acquiring academic knowledge is sufficient for
students
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 in order to pass their exams, and there is no need to learn any
skills
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 like cooking or dressing. I disagree
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 notion due to some grounds which will be explained in
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Firstly
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, learning different
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such
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 as cooking is an indispensable factor in every student’s life as they may need these competencies in their routine life later.
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,
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 may move out of their houses or leave their hometowns to continue education in other cities or countries.
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 their academic study is necessary for gaining the qualification for
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 are vital for them to live their daily
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.
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, instructing different abilities to children from young
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 aids them in becoming independent in all aspects of their
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 when they become older. It means that provided that practical
skills
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 were being taught to
students
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 and asked them to use the expertise in their routine
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, they would tend to do all their tasks in their future
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 independently. Evidence can be seen in children
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attended
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 schools where
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 educating academic courses, they focus precisely on teaching empirical
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 to their
students
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. These
students
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 are inclined to live without having
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 on others, and
also
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, they are more self-confident.
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, it can be said that learning
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theoretical
 knowledge and non-
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theoretical
skills
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 by
students
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 have equal value in their
lives
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. Admittedly, it is believed that for being more successful in passing exams,
students
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 need to only focus on their academic studies without any distractions. In
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 case, they can use much of their time to study properly for their exams.
However
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, the significance of learning
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 of
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such
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 as dressing in young
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 or cooking in older ones is much higher than their exam results. To conclude, it seems logical that educating
students
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 in both academic knowledge and hands-on skill
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 necessary
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 schools as they are of equal importance.
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, some people still consider the schools’ exam results all-important.
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