The tendency of human begins to copy one another is shown in the popularity of areas such as fashion and consumer goods .to what extend do you agree od disagree?
There is a contentious controversial argument today over whether having
tendency
to follow Add an article
a tendency
the tendency
famous
public that makes Correct article usage
the famous
people
to
buy Change the verb form
apply
products
or clothes like them . In this
essay, I am going to examine this
topic and then
I think in some ways it can be true, so I totally agree with this
idea.
psychologically, the main reason that citizens always follow famous people
is that,
they do not have enough Remove the comma
apply
self confidence
. Add a hyphen
self-confidence
Therefore
, they want to choose clothes like celebrities to increase their confidence in societies
. Fix the agreement mistake
society
Moreover
, some youths have a kind of competetion
especially at schools or universities to look better than their friends.Correct your spelling
competition
For example
, in my daughter school
all the children try to buy Add a comma
,school
products
which
are advertised Correct pronoun usage
that
in
Tv or social media and Change preposition
on
then
they have a kind of show off in their classes.
The second
reason that why societies like to copy other people
life styles
is that advertisements in social media and Tv programs Correct your spelling
lifestyles
has
been increased Change the verb form
have
noticably
. Correct your spelling
noticeably
For instance
, nowadays people
spend most of their time on the Internet and various applications like Instagram or Twitter in which a lot of celebrities advertise different products
from various companies ,so they entice shoppers to buy products
. Therefore
, these companies sell one product in just a second
to millions of people
and it can help to make people
look like each others
.
In conclusion, in my Change to a singular noun
other
opinion
Add a comma
,opinion
this
topic that populations try to buy or wear costumes like Add an article
the well
well known
public is true and it is increased in these days . Add a hyphen
well-known
However
, still
you can find Add a comma
,still
people
who have their own style and they do not follow other people
tastes and I think it is really appreciable.Submitted by sarahnaeini81 on
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