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some people think secondary school students should learn international news as one of their subjects, while others believe that this is a waste of valuable time. Discuss both views ang give your opinion

#people #school #students #news #subjects #waste #time #ang
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Schools and similar subjects about them have always been hot subjects for debate, one
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 is about whether or not should secondary
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 learn international
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 as one of their subjects, as usual, there are always two sides of the coin, others believe that
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 is a waste of valuable time. I will discuss
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 of all, let’s talk about the advantages of teaching international
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 as a subject to secondary
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students
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 being constantly updated with the latest international
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, technological advancements and similar, can be of great help toward
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, helping them decide their path.
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, international
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 is not supposed to be a heavy subject while having a lot of interesting and exciting open topics for the
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 to discuss, relaxing the
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 via stress relieving,
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 better learning quality.
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, whether the pros outweigh the cons is still the deciding factor for
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. As the data
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 books contain are usually severely outdated by up to 20 years,
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 may conflict with the up-to-date information that international
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 provide, causing great confusion in the
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 very inefficient. Even if said information confliction is not a problem, the
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 are still too immature and probably not ready for
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 diverse and complex issues, which in turn could cause misperception if
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 is not carefully selected for children that age. Considering the pros and the cons, I personally disagree, and that international
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 should only be taught as a subject when
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 are in high
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 at the earliest.
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