The plans below show the layout of a university sports center now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
The below two diagrams illustrates the current layout of a university and the proposed layout plan after it will be revamped. Overall, there will be a huge expansion in the university building, which will include the construction of a new leisure pool,
sports
hall, another changing Use synonyms
room
in the west along with a Use synonyms
sports
shop, two dance studios Use synonyms
side
by Use synonyms
side
and a café to the left of the entrance.
Now let’s elaborate on all the changes in detail, the most noticeable one is the leisure pool that will be built in place of outdoor courts Use synonyms
next
to the changing Linking Words
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in the west of the Use synonyms
sports
centre and the new Use synonyms
sports
hall that will be built on the east of the building Use synonyms
next
to Linking Words
sports
hall on the same Use synonyms
side
there will be two studios Use synonyms
side
by Use synonyms
side
, after the Use synonyms
second
studio they will be expanding the current gym area to accommodate more people. Linking Words
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, They will be removing the outdoor courts from both the left and right sides of the building. Now from the main entrance if you go right, there will be a café before the changing Linking Words
room
, that will Use synonyms
also
be built along with it. Now from the entrance we go left there will be a shop and another changing Linking Words
room
Use synonyms
next
to it in the proposed plan.
To summarize, we can say overall it is a good design which will accommodate more people and provide them with the state-of-the-art facilities, which will transform the old Linking Words
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centre building into a modern-day Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite