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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extant do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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People
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 who are immigrating to
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 foreign country need awareness of
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 it can impact
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society, I agree.In
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 is more interested in travelling to foreign places and inviting candidates as
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 is essential in public speaking countries,
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 it can be negative effects and serious consequences without proper communication.
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, job hiring companies hire
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 who are confident and fluent in speaking languages of English,French and Spanish.
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,migrating to a foreign country without an unknown
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 can cause some social problems.
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 as,local shops and vendors always need and appoint native speakers because they think they are familiar with foreign dialects and capable to handle customers.
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,Government
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 clearly mentioned to applicants that the person who is applying abroad need to know more than two languages other than the mother dialect
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because
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 argue that experiencing in the public and getting soft skills
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 gain some knowledge and public speaking skills.
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, to obtain some practical knowledge there is a need of gaining experience in a particular organisation
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 gives confidence and the ability to face critical situations publicly.
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, the government and higher authorities are inviting
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 from different countries for the global economy and improvisation of infrastructure. In conclusion, In my opinion,
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 need to know a foreign
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 when they are landing abroad. ,
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 it can lead to negative
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which is emotional and financial repercussions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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