In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a high tax on this kind of food. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Citizens in many countries have an argument that consuming fast

food

is the main reason

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having health problems

such

as heart attack and high blood pressure.

Therefore

, Authorities should hand

on

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this

problem by forcing high

tax

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taxes

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. From my point of view, I strongly agree with

this

statement and will discuss supporting reasons in

following

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paragraphs.

Firstly

, As the officials raise

tax

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the tax

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price rate for

unhealthy

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an unhealthy

the unhealthy

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meal

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meals

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,

food

supply brands will be aware of producing health-giving nutrition to

public

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the public

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.

For instance

, the Local Market Organization has revealed that many fast

food

companies add many tasty

flavors

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flavours

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and ingredients which is not beneficial to

costumers

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customers

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for making their cuisine being popular. To solve

this

problem, imposing

high

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a high

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tax

for

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on

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salty

flavors

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or unhealthy ingredients will make the cuisines try to produce

food

healthier

such

as decreasing salt and sugar to the

food

or using healthy oil for

deep fried

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.

Moreover

, giving high

tax

for junk

food

will make citizens in the country try to find healthier restaurants. Particularly, the Consumption Behavior Organization shows the result from

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a country

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country

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countries

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where the governments give an extra

tax

on fast

food

. The report shows that the trends of society’s consumption are gradually better by trying to eat salads and fresh fruits which cheaper than those kinds of restaurants. From

this

case, it is reasonable to raise

tax

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the tax

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price

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prices

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for controlling eating

behavior

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. To summarize, I agree with the statement that people nowadays are encounter to health problems which is mostly caused from fast

food

and, the government should give an extra

tax

payment for these kinds of nutrition.

This

solution will help their citizens get better health by trying healthier

food

.

Also

, the restaurants produce their

food

carefully.