People in many countries are spending less time with their family. What are the reasons, and effects of this?
The more societies develop, the more
people
spend less time
with their families
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.
...
This
problem is caused by many reasons and brings a lot of effects to societies.
There are many factors that affect people
, which make them unable to spend much time
being with their families
. Firstly
, people
are trying to achieve their goals. In fact, students who want to get a better result will have to pay more attention to studying, so that they could not spend time
talking with their parents, instead
, they spend time
going to extra classes and doing exercises. Workers focus on their job to get well paid, they might come home late and do not have time
for families’s
members. Remove the s
families’
In addition
, they are influenced by technology. There are more and more people
who use smartphones or laptops with overload duration. As a consequence, they might not want to spend time
with their families
.
Firstly
, not spending much time
with family will directly cause mental health problems. People
might become more negative and easily stressful
because of being overlaid with tasks. Replace the word
stressed
As a result
, people
around them will suffer from their attitude, which poison
their relationships. Change the verb form
poisons
In addition
, children who spend less time
with their family
are more vulnerable to social pressures, Fix the agreement mistake
families
such
as bullying. Secondly
, working too hard causes many physical diseases. For example
, employees often sit a whole day in the workplace. This
is the main reason which makes them suffer from obesity, cardiovascular or heart attacks.
In conclusion, there are many reasons which make people
spend less time
with family and it brings significant effects to society. However
, people
should balance their working time
and time
they spend with their families
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