Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the 21st century, human life become more materialistic and complex.
Moreover
,
people
's way of modern life
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result
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large amount of used and unused products in our surroundings.In
this
essay, I will explain the real causes of wastage and
government
solutions for reducing
this
problem.
To begin
,in our society overpopulation increased the need
of
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people
whereas manufacturer's
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more goods for their necessary needs. Admittedly,through advertisement concept of consumerism developed and
people
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on
fashion
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of the goods rather than
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usage. Apparently, industrial competition
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wastage of
resources
because these
produces
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only
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concerned about their profit
not
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any
environment
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regulations.
For example
, according to the world economic forum reporting 2015 World 70% of industrial waste ages are the result of excessive production and establishment of new model products.
For instance
, profit-making means more competition in industrial sectors whereby,
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needless things
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our society.
However
,
government
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can reduce
this problems
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with effective policies.
Firstly
, introduce recycling policy among customers as well as industries and impart fine for its violation.
Secondly
, give
people
guidance for the usage of natural materials for production which, mobilize balancing of needs and usage.To illustrate
this
, In Sweden
government
have a special department for regulating industrial
resources
intake and customers demands.
On the other hand
, if the customers need more goods Swedish
government
allows
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to take more
resources
from
environment
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.
Thirdly
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authority should financially support
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process and maintenance of
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products. In conclusion, there is a saying 'more needs means more wastage'so whoever taking care of the society make sure that all the
resources
in the nature not only for
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but
also
for
future
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generation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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