Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the 21st century, human life become more materialistic and complex. authority should financially support
Moreover
,people
's way of modern life Change the verb form
results
result
large amount of used and unused products in our surroundings.In Add the preposition
inresult
fromresult
this
essay, I will explain the real causes of wastage and government
solutions for reducing this
problem.
To begin
,in our society overpopulation increased the need of
Change preposition
for
people
whereas manufacturer's produced
more goods for their necessary needs. Admittedly,through advertisement concept of consumerism developed and Wrong verb form
produce
people
relay
on Correct your spelling
rely
fashion
of the goods rather than Add an article
the fashion
its
usage. Apparently, industrial competition Correct pronoun usage
their
Change the verb form
results
result
wastage of Add the preposition
inresult
fromresult
resources
because these produces
Change the verb form
produce
only
concerned about their profit Add a missing verb
are only
not
any Add the comma(s)
,not
environment
regulations.Replace the word
environmental
For example
, according to the world economic forum reporting 2015 World 70% of industrial waste ages are the result of excessive production and establishment of new model products.For instance
, profit-making means more competition in industrial sectors whereby, create
needless things Correct pronoun usage
which create
on
our society.
Change preposition
in
However
,government
can reduce Add an article
the government
this problems
with effective policies. Change the determiner
this problem
these problems
Firstly
, introduce recycling policy among customers as well as industries and impart fine for its violation. Secondly
, give people
guidance for the usage of natural materials for production which, mobilize balancing of needs and usage.To illustrate this
, In Sweden government
have a special department for regulating industrial resources
intake and customers demands. On the other hand
, if the customers need more goods Swedish government
allows that particular industries
to take more Change the determiner
that particular industry
those particular industries
resources
from environment
. Add an article
the environment
Thirdly
,Add an article
the
relying
process and maintenance of Add the preposition
onrelying
uponrelying
second hand
products.
In conclusion, there is a saying 'more needs means more wastage'so whoever taking care of the society make sure that all the Add a hyphen
second-hand
resources
in the nature not only for present
but Add an article
the present
also
for future
generation.Add an article
the future
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