One of your neighbor’s children has accidentally broken the front window of your car. You should write a letter to his/her parents and in your letter you should • introduce yourself • explain how it happened • and what they should do.

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Dear Ms Grimes, I am your

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-door neighbour and I am writing to inform you that your daughter, Sarah, broke the front passenger window of my Chevrolet Caprice while playing softball yesterday afternoon. The car is brand new. As you know it is winter now and

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aggravates the situation since I am not able to use the car. Hopefully, your homeowner's insurance will cover

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kind of damage. Please check with them to see if it is covered. If they do not pay for it, I will get two repair estimates for you so that you can determine how you will pay for the repair. Perhaps we could meet

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Saturday afternoon to discuss our options. In case you are not available at that time please let me know so that we would be able to make an appointment for some other time. Thank you in advance for your kind and considerate attention to the matter. Yours sincerely, Ms Green

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

162 words

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One of your neighbor’s children has accidentally broken the front window of your car. You should write a letter to his/her parents and in your letter you should • introduce yourself • explain how it happened • and what they should do.

It is so difficult for little ordinary people can do to improve the environmental problems today. Therefore, the state leader and big companies should be taking charge of solving the amount of environment damage. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise. Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree?

Demand for food is increasing worldwide. What is the cause of this? What measures can the international community as well as the government take to meet this demand?

Whether or not someone achieves aim in their life is mostly a question of luck. Do you agree or disagree?