More and more young people from wealthy countries are spending a short time doing unpaid work such as teaching or building houses for communities in poorer countries. Why young people choose to do so? Who will benefit more: young people or the communities? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Most young people spent time on
work
for the welfare of society. Especially
youth
from wealthy nations are spending their time on educating or helping the
communities
in poor
countries
without taking any pay.
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the reasons
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young people
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do so, and how the
communities
is being benefitted from the help. Many young people from developed nations doing unpaid
work
. Because
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most
youth
beliefs in the equality of everyone in the world. And, helping other
communities
will help to make
this
world a better place.
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was conducted among college students
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Kingston University, United Kingdom. In
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, asking about unpaid
community
work
in poor
countries
, more than 70%
students
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were agreed and were willing to help
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those
countries
.
In addition
, asking the reason for doing the unpaid
community
work
, 67% responded that goin
this
work
will give them equality and will provide more opportunities.
Hence
,
Youth
from developed
countries
, because of their expertise, will provide
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great success to
communities
established in poor
countries
.
Communities
will get the most benefits from
this
service. They will get a better education, food and other daily needs.
For example
, a small village name Jhabua in India is one of the
most poor
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areas not having
the
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toilets, schools and proper roads. So, the young students from
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Kingston university decided to do the
community
work
for the village. Because of them
Community
developed 10 toilets and built the school.
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the end,
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get a lot of benefits. In the conclusion,
Youth
from developed
countries
beliefs
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the equality of the wrl world. And because of that
community
is benefitting a lot.
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