More and more young people from wealthy countries are spending a short time doing unpaid work such as teaching or building houses for communities in poorer countries. Why young people choose to do so? Who will benefit more: young people or the communities? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Most young people spent time on
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for the welfare of society. Especially
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from wealthy nations are spending their time on educating or helping the
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in poor
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without taking any pay.
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the reasons
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young people
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do so, and how the
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is being benefitted from the help. Many young people from developed nations doing unpaid
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. Because
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most
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beliefs in the equality of everyone in the world. And, helping other
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will help to make
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world a better place.
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was conducted among college students
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Kingston University, United Kingdom. In
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, asking about unpaid
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work
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in poor
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, more than 70%
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were agreed and were willing to help
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those
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.
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, asking the reason for doing the unpaid
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work
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, 67% responded that goin
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work
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will give them equality and will provide more opportunities.
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from developed
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, because of their expertise, will provide
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great success to
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established in poor
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.
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will get the most benefits from
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service. They will get a better education, food and other daily needs.
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, a small village name Jhabua in India is one of the
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areas not having
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toilets, schools and proper roads. So, the young students from
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Kingston university decided to do the
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work
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for the village. Because of them
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developed 10 toilets and built the school.
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the end,
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community
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get a lot of benefits. In the conclusion,
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from developed
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beliefs
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the equality of the wrl world. And because of that
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is benefitting a lot.
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