More and more young people from wealthy countries are spending a short time doing unpaid work such as teaching or building houses for communities in poorer countries. Why young people choose to do so? Who will benefit more: young people or the communities? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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for the welfare of society. Especially youth
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in poor countries
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beliefs in the equality of everyone in the world. And, helping other communities
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