Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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should be held back from the masses. I strongly agree with the former school of thought. Use synonyms
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of scientific research, business and academia have so much to offer. A lot of studies are undertaken in these Use synonyms
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believe that it only makes sense that once acquired, Linking Words
information
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should be disseminated to the masses in order to improve their quality of life. Use synonyms
On the other hand
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and their relevance would be lost if they let out some vital secrets of the trade. In my view, the former argument is stronger.
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on any topic at all. It would Use synonyms
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be an arduous yet fruitless task to try and hide some seemingly valuable Linking Words
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from the general public. It may seem as though an expert's relevance may be lost in that case, but Use synonyms
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from the truth. There are very few people who can be the jack of all trades and master of them all. People may be privy to the deepest secrets of these Linking Words
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but they would still need the input of an expert to fully comprehend the content they have been gifted with. Use synonyms
For example
, there is a plethora of knowledge on researches on diseases and their remedies on the internet Linking Words
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that one would expect to see few to no patients in any hospital. Linking Words
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, the hospital is always buzzing with clients as knowledge on the subject matter is never equal to expertise. Linking Words
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, no matter how well educated any parent is, it is a rare case to see them educate their children to the highest level of education without help from the academic Linking Words
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In conclusion, though there may be fears that sharing vital Use synonyms
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in one's field may render experts irrelevant, these fears are unfounded as many individuals still require the understanding of experts of the Use synonyms
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of scientific research, business and academia. Without them, the data obtained from whichever source may just be gibberish to the layman.Use synonyms
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