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Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student’s performance. Continual assessment such as course work and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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People start to use examinations to assess the performance of
students
 for a long
time
. Recently, some argue that the
examination
 could be
instead
 of the continual
assessment
 like
course
 work and projects could.
However
,
such
 a statement suffers from both logical and factual fallacies, and it should be examined meticulously. I disagree with
this
 view almost entirely. As far as effectiveness, efficiency are concerned, I strongly hold that
examination
 is the best way of assessing a student’s performance.
First
 of all, the
examination
 has the advantage of effectiveness. The
examination
 has been used as the test measure for so long that its accuracy was validated fully.
Students
 usually need to complete a group of questions within a certain
time
 without the internet or help from others. Because of that, tests reflect the real knowledge level of
students
. In
course
 work,
students
 have a longer
time
 to achieve the goal and they can turn to the Internet or other people who know that.
In addition
, as I say, the
examination
 usually takes up a shorter
time
 than continual
assessment
. It means that
examination
 could assess a student in higher efficiency.
For example
, In my school, the performance of
students
 is assessed by formal examinations in almost all the important courses because of the effectiveness and efficiency. It is undeniable that continual
assessment
 gives
students
 enough
time
 to exhibit their level of abilities.
However
, it is hard to be identified because it is not strict. A recent convey conducted by UNESCO revealed that
course
 project is applied in about 90 per cent of art lessons. I suppose that continual
assessment
 is more appropriate to the non-scientific courses. In conclusion,
although
course
 work and projects are playing an increasingly significant role in
assessment
, I still believe that it is not a satisfactory way to replace the examinations.
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