You looked after a friend’s house while he/she was away on holidays. While you were there, you broke one of the windows. Write to your friend. In the letter, Explain what happened Apologise for breaking the window Say how you are going to fix the issue

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Dear Annie, I hope your vacation was memorable and refreshing.

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letter is in regards to window damage that was caused in your absence at home.

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every day before leaving for the office, I ensured that all the doors and windows are locked.

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, due to heavy storms and snowfall

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weekend, the bedroom window opened up despite putting its latch in the morning. Indeed, it resulted in the lower two glass panes being broken into pieces.

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, the strong winds caused a lot of havoc and devastated many people's belongings. As I came in the evening, entered the house and went upstairs I realized all

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has happened. Apologies for not being able to avoid it. Above and beyond, I have broken your trust and failed to maintain your house, when you were not in town. Actually, I have booked a carpenter today. He will be visiting tomorrow morning and repairing the window.

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, he will

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put an extra stronger latch, to avoid

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loss in future. I hope to be more vigilant and careful going forward. Yours Sincerely James

suryathakur05Fri Dec 24 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

183 words

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