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5. Some people believe that reading stories from e book better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In
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children
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computers
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 of
such
 gadgets are inevitable. Some individuals argue that it is far more beneficial for
children
 to read from an electronic gadget rather than spending hours in front of the television or personal
computers
.
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books
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 for
computers
 or television. Parents are always being wary of screen time their
child
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 spend
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watching cartoons or playing video games and try to compensate
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 with electronic
books
.
Firstly
, reading e-
books
 gives parents a sense of surety that the
child
 is not wasting his/ her time on useless activities.
In addition
, there are possibilities that the
child
 might come across explicit
contents
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content
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 while browsing on
computers
 or TV.
For instance
,
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children
 who
gets
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 addicted
with
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 gaming or cartoons find little or no time to study their lessons and the contents of digital
books
 can easily be controlled by guardians. These few instances have bolstered the parents’ faith
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e-reader
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an e-reader
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 assurance to them that the
child
 is getting some knowledge Even though electronic
books
 look lucrative to some but the health risks associated with
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 cannot be neglected, the idea that they are harmless
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 completely preposterous. Not only the persistent exposure to the gadget screen for hours may cause health
issue
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issues
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 in
children
 but
also
, cause them to become addicted and becomes less social in future. A recent report in a newspaper article suggested that
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60
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 of
children
 who engage in electronic devices are much likely to develop myopia. Overall the usage of technologies by
children
 has
detrimental
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effect
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effects
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 on
child
’s health and social development.
This
 essay argued that guardians who
prefers
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 electronic reader have
flawed
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 understanding of
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 gadgets and underestimate the negative effects they cause. In my opinion, parents should discourage the usage of any kind of electronic gadgets by their young offspring.
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