popular events like football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in existing international tensions and releasing emotions in a safe way . To what extent do you agree and disagree with with the opinion
Sports
play as
an integral part of any civilised community. Though big Change preposition
apply
sports
events
are considered as an opportunity to improve relations among countries
, but
these Remove the conjunction
apply
events
come at great
cost. Correct article usage
a great
This
essay will discuss in detail as to
why Change preposition
apply
such
huge affairs are not everybody’s game
.
First
of all, organising such
events
burdens national
economy of developing Correct article usage
the national
countries
. Nevertheless
, developing countries
take pride while hosting such
occasions but corruption takes it’s
toll. When Replace the word
its
commonwealth
games
were organised in India, they spent exceptionally on opening ceremonies, infrastructure
and paid international stars. Later on, commonwealth
games
came under the radar of their country’s vigilance committee on wrongdoings by government officials in siphoning off public money. Moreover
, such
countries
can spend funds on higher education, improving their infrastructure
and eradicate
poverty. Wrong verb form
eradicating
For instance
, African countries
such
as Congo and Sudan have huge
issue Add an article
a huge
such
as famine where basic necessity such
food
and water is scarce.
Change preposition
as food
In addition
to the above, sometimes relation
between Fix the agreement mistake
relations
two
countries
are
so worse that their Change the verb form
is
enemity
can even get worse. Mostly when Correct your spelling
enmity
two
such
nations play, spectators turn into wild
mob. As if they are fighting Add an article
a wild
war
at that very moment. Add an article
a war
the war
For example
, in last
football world cup, Correct article usage
the last
news
was all over the Add an article
the news
the
places as Remove the redundancy
apply
audience
started fights on Add an article
the audience
street
after the Add an article
the street
game
was over. Further
, security
of Correct article usage
the security
players
has also
been a cause of concern. Few
years back, an international cricket match was held in Pakistan, when Change the article
A few
Correct your spelling
someone
some one
from stands pointed out guns at the Correct your spelling
someone
players
of the opposition.
In conclusion, it can be said such
large events
are not meant for every country. They should rather focus on the important things that matter for their development. Moreover
, there are other means with
which tensions and emotions can be released. play an integral part in any civilised community. Though big Change preposition
by
sports
occasions are considered as an opportunity to improve relations among countries
, these events
come at a great cost. This
essay will discuss in detail why such
huge affairs are not everybody’s game
.
First
of all, organising events
burdens the national economy of developing nations. Nevertheless
, developing communities take pride while hosting sports
occasions but corruption takes its toll. When commonwealth
games
were organised in India, they spent exceptionally on opening ceremonies, infrastructure
and paid international stars. Later on, commonwealth
games
came under the radar of their country’s vigilance committee on wrongdoings by government officials in siphoning off public money. Moreover
, states can spend funds on higher education, improving their infrastructure
and eradicating poverty. For instance
, African regions like Congo and Sudan have a huge issue in the shape of famine where the basic necessity of food and water is scarce.
In addition
to the above, sometimes relations between two
land is so worse that their enmity can even get worse. Mostly when two
nations play, spectators turn into a wild mob. As if they are fighting a war at that very moment. For example
, in the last
football world cup, the news was all over the place as the audience started fights on the street after the game
was over. Further
, the security of players
has also
been a cause of concern. A few years back, an international cricket match was held in Pakistan, when someone from the stands pointed out guns at the players
of the opposition.
In conclusion, it can be said large sporting events
are not meant for every country. They should rather focus on the important things that matter for their development. Besides
, there are other means by which tensions and emotions can be released.Submitted by harsimarkaur4 on
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