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IIn some countries, owning a house rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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There are many trends in urban design and real estate of each nation, as it depends on its geographical nature. So, the popularity of buying and renting vary from
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 to another. Economic status is a major factor as it controls the level of individual living.so that, these aspects
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the popularity of choosing
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to own
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 or renting a property. I believe that having a mansion is a positive trend which achieving
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life
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 of all, buying a house is considered
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a lifelong investment, as its value increases along with time other than cash money.
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the
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 sense of security and ownership.
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otherwise
, some nations
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 that as a condition of marriage the groom must
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 his own apartment at least
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, I consider that as a positive development in long term investment, as retires can get benefit from what they own for their sons and daughters
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 example, they can start to pay for a house during their thirties and when they reach retirement age, they pay off it and
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 will give them an option to sell it in order to increase their savings To conclude, purchasing fixed assets
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 as mansions is good for
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 long
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 from life’s fluctuations and you do not have to pay
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rent
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 a landlord or to prison yourself I a fixed salary job in order to afford the rent price. 241
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