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Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn language. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#english #language #country
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 is a
language
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which
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 accounts for various usage in global citizens' life, from business to manufacturing. It is said that studying
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 in
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 is the best way.
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, it is not the only method. In my personal view of point, both are acceptable arguments.
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where
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, where people use English as a mainstream tool to communicate,
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people
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 use
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 as a mainstream tool to communicate are great environments for
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learners
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 to enhance their
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 and skill. By indulging in that environment,
people
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 are more likely to form their linguistic
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 faster as they are forced to use the
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 every day. The
learners
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also
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 because they have more opportunities to interact with
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people
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 than
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 without an appropriate environment. On the other
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,
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 those whose financial ability is unavailable to afford expenses and school
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 in
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-speaking
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, learning
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at
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 one's hometown with well-prepared teaching modules and
appropriate
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an appropriate
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environment
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environments
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 may help them to learn the
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 as well. In order for a person to learn a
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, they need to be exposed to the
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 as much as possible.
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, by creating classrooms with professional teaching modules, I believe the
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. Even though they are not exposed to as much as their companions in
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, they can use the Internet to do the same thing. There are various social platforms that one can participate
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language
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. Learning
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language
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 takes time and effort. There are various ways to absorb the
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 into our brain: Studying in an
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-speaking country, at the local school with well-prepared teaching modules or on the Internet. As long as the
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 are doing their best, I believe they can learn the
language
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 with ease.
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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • immersion
  • fluency
  • advanced
  • communicate
  • accommodate
  • exposure
  • cultural understanding
  • native speakers
  • educational institutions
  • resources
  • diverse
  • globalized
  • interact
  • self-study
  • online courses
  • tutors
  • language exchange
  • books
  • videos
  • podcasts
  • language proficiency
  • language barrier
  • conversation partners
  • progress
  • motivated
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