Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries. Why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative development?

These days,

tourist

industries are currently

improved

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and expanded by a large number of developing

countries

, which has been a concern to the general public. In my opinion,

this

phenomenon exerts both positive and negative effects

to

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many aspects of life. In

this

essay, I will

also

discuss some primary reasons leading to

this

trend. One of the most significant causes of

this

trend is that

tourism

is the best way to

develop

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countries

to boost the

economic

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,

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and enhance communities' lives standards.

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of all, it includes

find

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out more places of interest, providing better services about accommodation, restaurants, tours and travels, etc.

besides

that increase a number of employment for local

dweller

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,

Therefore

, these changes surely appeal

international

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visitors, which cause the whole economy and local

residents

to make profits and increase the final income.

Moreover

, another reason for my argument is that expanding

tourism

helps to raise the popularity of national images.

For instance

, a large

amount

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of beautiful pictures will be sent and spread on the Internet to promote the

countries

’ beauty and attract tourists from all

path

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of life.

On the other hand

, many developing

countries

which are expanding

tourism

are

also

considered to be a negative development. Specifically,

such

minor changes in

tourist

attractions can

also

put heavy pressure on

residents

who are in their vicinity, so that, local

residents

may have to change their lifestyle to keep up with the pace of

tourist

attraction,

thus

, discouraging them from following traditional ways of living.

Besides

, expanding

tourist

industries means less space for other activities and industries

such

as farming, industrial areas, etc. In conclusion,

tourism

is expanding

as a result

of its importance to the economy of

the

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developing

countries

. I totally believe that it is both a pros and cons development. It not only encourages the

countries

to develop but

also

demonstrates the national images.

However

, it

also

exerts negative effects

such

as pressure on local

residents

and erases the traditional lifestyles.