Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries. Why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative development?
These days,
tourist
industries are currently being improved and expanded by a huge number of developing countries
, which has been a concern to the general public. In my opinion, this
phenomenon exerts both positive and negative effects on many aspects of life. In this
essay, I will also
discuss some primary reasons leading to this
trend.
One of the most significant causes of this
trend is that tourism
is the best way to develop countries
to boost the economy and enhance communities' lives
standards. First of all, it includes finding out more places of interest, providing better services Replace the word
living
about
accommodation, restaurants, tours and Change preposition
for
travels
, etc. Fix the agreement mistake
travel
besides
that increase a
number of employment for local dwellers, Change the article
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Therefore
, these changes surely appeal to international visitors, which cause the whole economy and local residents
to make profits and increase the final income. Moreover
, another reason for my argument is that expanding tourism
helps to raise the popularity of national
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the national
images
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image
For instance
, a large number of beautiful pictures will be sent and spread on the Internet to promote the countries
’ beauty and attract tourists from all paths of life.
On the other hand
, many developing countries
which are expanding tourism
are also
considered to be a negative development. Specifically, such
minor changes in tourist
attractions can also
put heavy pressure on residents
who are in their vicinity, so that, local residents
may have to change their lifestyle to keep up with the pace of tourist
attraction, thus
, discouraging them from following traditional ways of living. Besides
, expanding tourist
industries means less space for other activities and industries such
as farming, industrial areas, etc.
In conclusion, tourism
is expanding as a result
of its importance to the economy of developing countries
. I totally believe that it is both a pros and cons development. It not only encourages the countries
to develop but also
illustrates the national images
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image
However
, it also
has negative effects such
as pressure on local residents
and erases the
traditional lifestyles.Correct article usage
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task response
Please ensure that the essay fully addresses the prompt by discussing both positive and negative aspects of expanding tourist industries in developing countries. Additionally, provide specific examples and support for your ideas to enhance clarity and completeness.
coherence and cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are present, but they could be strengthened by clearly stating the position taken and summarizing the main points. Ensure that ideas are logically organized and connected throughout the essay to improve coherence and cohesion.