In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
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the
most significant issues all around the world. Change preposition
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However
, agriculture efficiency has increased due to recent enhancements. Although
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food
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I will discuss the causes of Add a comma
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this
problem, such
as climate change, and high
cost of agricultural Correct article usage
the high
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. Also
, probable solutions including preserving environment
and producing economic Add an article
the environment
machines
will be discussed.
Climate change caused by deforestation has an inevitable detrimental impact on food
production. Developed countries
remove the trees for more farmlands in the poor countries
, resulting in more floods or drought and famine. For example
, great
proportion of coffee is planted in South America, Add an article
a great
thus
noticeable tracts of Amazon have diminished by facilitated companies due to harvesting more coffee seeds leading to famine in most of
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the South
countries
. The more planting vegetations, more
infertile the soil becomes. The measure Correct article usage
the more
could
be taken for Correct pronoun usage
that could
this
problem is implementing more restrictions on harvesting agricultural products by foreign companies.
New practical machines
are one of the major reasons for agricultural advances which are prohibitively expensive for poor countries
possibly resulting in less amount of food
production. Wealthy countries
, as they can afford highly-cost devices, tend to utilizing
new technology to increase their efficiency in agriculture. Change the verb form
utilize
For instance
, USA
is one the top Correct article usage
the USA
food
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the world
up-to-dated
technology. African Correct your spelling
up-to-date
countries
budget
cannot meet these expenses and they use classical techniques; Fix the agreement mistake
budgets
therefore
, the products are inadequate for the population. Probable
solution for Correct article usage
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this
issue,
is to provide poor Remove the comma
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countries
with new machines
for free or producing
some affordable agricultural devices.
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produce
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and climate change caused by developed countries
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the reason
reason
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reasons
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