Write a letter to a cinema manager you have previously been to regarding a problem you had. In your letter mention - Which the movie was and when you saw it - What the problem was - What the manager should do to rectify the problem No more less than 150 words
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I feel the need to bring to your attention an issue I have faced while watching cinema in your theatre. Allow me to elaborate
further
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Last
weekend, I visited the cinema complex to watch the movie named "the stolen rock". While Linking Words
this
is rated as 18 plus film, younger children were Linking Words
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allowed in the hall. To my ,surprise Linking Words
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film is full of violent content and youngsters are exposed to violence. Linking Words
Moreover
, the hall was messy and unclean. There were popcorns scattered all over the seats from the previous batch who watched the movie.
I trust you can empathise with my concerns. Linking Words
Thus
, I am expecting you to put in place stricter rules on screening the audience with age-appropriate films that are shown. Linking Words
Also
, I am expecting you to reprimand the responsible staff for Linking Words
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oversight to happen and make sure the hall is clean after the end of every show.
Your timely attention to Linking Words
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matter is needed.
Yours faithfully,
SemaLinking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite