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At the present time, the population of some countries includes relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.

#time #population #countries #adults #people
I am going to discuss the situation when a number of grown
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 prevails count of the old and which scale of effect it has. In the beginning, we should admit that numerous countries have that case which can bring about both pluses and minuses. Anyhow, I am quite sure that
such
 circumstances have more significant advantages
thaen
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than
then
 disadvantages. On the one hand, the aged
people
 are original link with our history and past.
Moreover
, they can be the
first
 true source of knowledge and eyewitness of momentous events.
In addition
, they inure to example for a new generation how to be kind, conscious human.
Thus
, they take an
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 place in society.
On the other hand
, we should specify that adults can be classified as
people
 who are able to
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work during their active years . Meanwhile, most countries have a tax system where the volume of pensions directly depends on the
quantity
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 of workers.
In other words
, more
people
 of
in
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an
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 employable age can provide
more
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 beneficial life for
people
 who
retirement
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. They make an enormous contribution
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to the contemporary
economicy
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economic
economics
 system.
Also
, both adults and adolescents can easily get used to
handlinge
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handling
 modern devices and applying new methods for solution solving problems in restlessly developing spheres.
Consequently
, we have more active
people
 who can keep up with the time. Obviously, we admit that
such
 tendency has more advantages
thaen
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than
then
 disadvantages.
Nonetheless
, we should provide opportunities for young
people
 and do not
to
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forget to do aged
people
 justice
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