Is The murder of Dee Dee Blancharde a biased case?
In 2016
Gypsy
Rose Blandcharde
was sentenced to 10 Correct your spelling
Blanchard
years
of jail time at Chillicothe Correctional Center in Missouri for second degree
murder of her mother Claudine Add a hyphen
second-degree
Dee
Dee
Blancharde
. Correct your spelling
Blanchard
Gypsy
has been said to have leukemia
, asthma, vision and hearing impairment, muscular dystrophy, and seizures by her mother Change the spelling
leukaemia
Dee
Dee
. She would be fed through a feeding tube and was given SEVERAL medications that she never needed. She had the mind of a 7 year
old, never had friends or had any close interactions with kids her age. She lived with her mom, Correct your spelling
7-year-old
Dee
Dee
, who was mentally ill and a hoarder. Dee
Dee
had a mental illness, Munchausen syndrome by proxy, which made her fake Gypsy
’s disorders in order to receive attention, money, and sympathy for living with and caring for a sick kid. Soon after they had moved into their new house in March 2008, Gypsy
started connecting the dots and found out what her mother had been doing to her. She found out she could walk, wasn't allergic to sugar, and was actually 19 years
old and not 15. A few months later, she became friends with the girl across the street and was secretly introduced to a Christian dating site where she met her partner in crime (literally). Her new online boyfriend’s name was Nick Godejohn who had a mental illness called Dissociative Identity Disorder and was also
autistic. Him
and Change the pronoun
He
Gypsy
would secretly call each other on Dee
Dee
’s computer and would plot their murder and runaway
. On June 9th, 2015 Correct your spelling
run away
Dee
Dee
was murdered with 17 stab wounds on her back/neck. Nick and Gypsy
were tracked down and found 5 days later by the post they shared on Facebook earlier that day (first image). After they were found they were immediately taken into questioning. In conclusion
I think Add a comma
conclusion,
Gypsy
’s trial is straightforward, biased and unfair. I think she does not deserve 10 years
in prison along with
constant reminders of her trauma and instead
should be sent to a better mental facility with less
Change the quantifier
fewer
years
to serve. A person with the amount of trauma that Gypsy
went through might not be able to maybe never be able to function normally again. This
case is biased because there are people who think Dee
Dee
deserved this
and want to free Gypsy
and there are the
people that think Correct article usage
apply
Gypsy
deserved a longer sentence because they are in favor
of or like Change the spelling
favour
Dee
Dee
and dont
believe that Correct your spelling
don't
Dee
Dee
abused Gypsy
.Submitted by sargsyan_armine on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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