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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they wok be able to read everything they want online

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In
this
 age of change, the importance of digitalization which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many
people
 claiming that in the future
people
 will be more interested to read news online rather than buying printed
newspapers
 or
books
. The substantial influence of digital development has sparked controversy over the potential impact in upcoming years.
This
 essay completely agrees with the statement because the online version of
newspapers
 and
books
 are more convenient to store and read. There are several reasons which will
further
 elaborate
this
 argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that digitalization has changed
people
’s preferences and behaviour, including the way how to read
newspapers
 and
books
. Digitalizing printed
newspapers
 or
books
 is a new way to attract
people
 to read. It is a solution for the current problem which felt by
people
 that bringing printed materials especially when they come in bundles, is space-consuming, heavy, and inconvenient. Softcopies of
newspapers
 or
books
 will make
people
 around the world read the news which is not available in their country in a printed version.
On the other hand
, the production of printed goods needs so much pulp and paper which are produced by big factories by cutting a thousand trees in woodlands. If that practice stay occurs for a longer period, the impact on earth will be catastrophic. Deforestation can lead to various disasters,
for
instance
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 floods, landslides, and animal extinction. According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of reading online
newspapers
 or
books
 are indeed too great to ignore. Switching to online materials can prevent the cutting of the woods.
Thus
, it is very useful for the environmental sustainability of our planet.
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