You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter, • describe the problem with the equipment • explain how this problem is affecting your work • say what you want the shop or company to do

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to explain my dissatisfaction with the headphone that was supplied by your company. I am unable to hear properly with

this

equipment as it is impacting my daily work life. Please allow me to explain. I am working from home and my job is entitled to answer calls from customers. In order to make my job ,comfortable I preferred to purchase a headphone from your company.

However

, I am experiencing difficulties hearing the customer on call.

Moreover

, everyone had complained to my manager about the communication challenges which they had experienced only with me. It is highly impacting my day-to-day operations. I would be grateful if you could replace the device as it has a warranty and it was purchased recently. I have attached the order of receipt for your reference. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jeevitha.S

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

146 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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