Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Progress being natural and inevitable, has always been demanded by a successful nation. Few ethnic groups assume that being advanced in the economy, the prime matter of concern, while others are of the view that, the development has been considered to be wholesome. I firmly believe that the adequate consideration of success needed to be in multifarious levels.
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essay delves into both the views and delivers a stance with the latter.Submitted by blessonmathewece on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite