These days, more and more people are going to other countries for a significant period of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits of doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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