You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel, in their feedback, participants at the meeting told that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel • Say what the participants liked about the hotel? • Explain why they were unhappy about the food? • Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear Sir or Madam,
I writing to give some
feedbacks
about the Green Star's all-day meeting in your hotel on Sunday, 25th May.
Correct your spelling
feedback
Last
week, we have taken part in a meeting to celebrate our Linking Words
sucessful
achievement in your hotel. Fortunately, most of Correct your spelling
successful
participants
have been appealed Add an article
the participants
with
your facilities. They said that the windows which open Change preposition
to
a
city views are so impressive.
Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
However
, some people complained TO me that there are some issues IN foodS. Linking Words
Firstly
, the waiters Linking Words
sometime
served an unexact dish for guests when they called Replace the word
sometimes
beefs
, they received fish. Change the wording
beef
kinds of beef
slices of beef
portions of beef
Additionally
, a vegetarian guest Linking Words
have
noticed to waiters about their start dish, they had a chicken soup.
I know that our meeting Change the verb form
has
have
a large number of participants; Change the verb form
has
therefore
, your waiters might have a lot of works needing to Linking Words
prepare
. Add a missing verb
be prepare
However
, I suggest that your hotel should hire some part-time or temporary staff for big events TO ENSURE THE STASTICFICAITON OF PARTICIPANTS
I hope we will have more opportunities to work in future. Thank Linking Words
for
your attention!
Yours faithfully,
Wendy NguyenCorrect pronoun usage
you for
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite