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Your photograph recently won a photography competition and will be shown in an exhibition. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter . describe the photograph you sent to the competition . tell him/her about the exhibition where your photo will be shown . invite him/her to the exhibition

#photograph #photography #competition #exhibition #friend #photo
Dear
sam
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Sam
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, Hi! hope my letter found you in pink
of
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about
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 your health and everyone in your family. As you already know that
i
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I
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 have
great
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a great
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 interest in photography and
i
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I
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recently taken
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took
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 a part in international photography sessions in which
i
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I
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 won
first
 prize
on
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in
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 my
photogargh
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photograph
 .
Well
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,Well
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i
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I
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 have done my best to click that picture of
sunset
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a sunset
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 as it
include
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includes
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 an amazing view of
evening
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the evening
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 in which half
sun
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the sun
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 is visible between the sea and
number
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a number
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 of birds are flying in the sky .In
fact
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 that image gives
illusion
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the illusion
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 of
real
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a real
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 sunset view. I
also
 wanna tell you that
this
 photo will be shown in one of the best worldwide
museum
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museums
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 in New York where all the famous photographers are
visting
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visiting
on
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apply
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next
 week to see my photo.
In addition
 to
this
, the manager of
New
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the New
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york
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York
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 museum send me an email and invited me and my family
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to on
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on
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an
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 exhibition show which reflects
as
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apply
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my dream
comes
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coming
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 true and
i
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I
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 will really feel proud
in
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at
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this
 moment. I would like you to join
this
 show with me and
spent
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spend
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pericious
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precious
pernicious
 time with my family. Hope for
meeting
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a meeting
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 soon. Yours
Truely
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Truly
, Hasan
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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