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More and more plastic waste has polluted cities, countryside's and oceans. What problems does it cause and what measures can be taken?

#plastic #waste #cities #countryside #oceans #measures
Problems: + Damage the ecosystem.
Plastic
 wastes are dumped into the ocean and create an detrimental impact on marine animals. They might be dead by suffocation or get poisoned by chemicals from the material. + Chemicals used in producing
plastic
 are absorbed by a human body. Some of these compounds has been found to alter hormones or have other potential human health effects. Measures: + Government should tighten laws that prevent companies from
plastic
 packaging. Increasing tax on
plastic
 made packages will cause a higher price tag that deter users from purchasing a good.
Consequently
, companies will have to remove
plastic
 in their manufacturing for the cost-effective reason. + Companies should use biodegradable packages in their production. For
this
 reason, boxes and container swill be decomposed within a short period of time,
thus
 less pratice will be available on the surface of the earth that will benefit the environment.
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