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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

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Due to the current ever-growing innovation of science and modern technology which fortuitously become a medium leads to development in manufactured
food
 and beverage. As a matter of fact, high
sugar
 content
products
 become one of the inevitable outcomes and are easily being found in numerous groceries or supermarkets. In my point of view, I totally agree that sugary
products
 should be taxed at a higher rate to minimize
sugar
 consumption. In fact, people that consume an excess of
sugar
 than usual for a long time surely suffer unexpected diseases in the future. According to scientific documents, various types of illnesses are seriously harmful, namely, obesity, along with other incurable diseases
such
 as diabetes and cancer. Coke is a prime example, there are 39 grams of
sugar
 in an original 12 oz Coca-cola can and if we drink one, our body needs 2 hours to consume everything while during which time, our brain loses concentration and possibly endures a little headache.
In addition
,
products
 that contain high levels of
sugar
 not only are harmful to our health but
also
 are expensive. Obviously, unlike fresh
food
, they are frequently packed
products
 so it is undeniable that the production cost is correspondingly high.
For instance
, in Vietnam, with 1 dollar, we can purchase fresh
food
 in markets and prepare a fully nutritious meal while with the equivalent amount, we can only afford one big size Coca-cola bottle. In conclusion, absorbing high
sugar
 content
food
 or beverage not only cause harm to our body but
also
 our finance. The government should be in action as quick as possible to protect citizens health by immediately providing solutions to encourage people to reduce their high
sugar
food
 consumption.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • health problems
  • manufactured food and drink products
  • sugary products
  • excessive sugar consumption
  • discourage
  • promote
  • healthier choices
  • reduce
  • increased taxes
  • fund
  • health education
  • prevention programs
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