The picture depicts the different steps in the life of honey bees.

The picture depicts the different steps in the
life
of honey bees. The total
life
duration of honey bees is around 34 or 35
days
, and there were five stages in their whole
life
, from the egg to the mature
bee
.
In
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the beginning of a
bee
's
life
, a mature female
bee
usually puts one or two eggs in
each
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three
days
which hatch in nine or ten
days
. In the
next
five
days
, immature bees become fully developed and begin their
life
as a nymph. In the following stage, a week later, nymph moults for the
first
time to grow in size,
then
after nine
days
there was a moult again and a new young emerges which has new stripes on its skin. At the fourth stage, a mature
bee
needs four
days
and final moulting
to begin
laying.
Finally
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females lay new eggs again, and the cycle continues forever.
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