The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantage?

Nowadays,
people
prefer to eat fast
foods
because they are more available
however
,it has some drawbacks and benefits .In
this
essay ,I will talk about both of them
although
,the disadvantages of these
meals
are more than advantages. In the modern world,many individuals work for long hours and most of them do not have time for cooking at home,they usually eat their
meals
at their workplace or restaurants to save their time.
Additionally
,fast
foods
such
as pizza and burgers are popular among youngsters who eat outside as
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entertainment with their friends.Income in food industries
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one of the crucial
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of money taking.many employees work in factories which prepare and sell
foods
respectively.
Consequently
,some financial problems will be solved in these communities.
For example
,in the US the Macdonald
resturants
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restaurants
are one of the best
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for
people
who look for
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job
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.
On the other hand
,some of these
meals
are oily and salty which are not healthy and lead to some health issues.Heart disease has raised in modern countries
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to countries
which
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consuming
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less fast
foods
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.
Moreover
,obesity is one of the common health problems in western nations that
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to fatty
foods
.
Additionally
,
people
's lifestyle changed in families who eat more restaurant
meal
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,often they are not at home and do not eat
meals
at
time
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and with their families.For
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reasons
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.eating prepared
foods
have detrimental effects on individuals well-being. In conclusion,in fast pace
world
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individuals are busy with their work or study and
cook
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homemade
meals
are difficult for many which inclined them to eat these unhealthy
foods
.If authorities pay attention to
standardize
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non homemade
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foods
in order to decrease salt and oil in them ,they will be
healther
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healthier
for citizens.Educating students at schools
improve
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young
people
knowledgeable
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about
foods
.
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