The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantage?
Nowadays,
people
prefer to eat fast foods
because they are more available however
,it has some drawbacks and benefits .In this
essay ,I will talk about both of them although
,the disadvantages of these meals
are more than advantages.
In the modern world,many individuals work for long hours and most of them do not have time for cooking at home,they usually eat their meals
at their workplace or restaurants to save their time.Additionally
,fast foods
such
as pizza and burgers are popular among youngsters who eat outside as a
entertainment with their friends.Income in food industries Remove the article
apply
are
one of the crucial Change the verb form
is
portion
of money taking.many employees work in factories which prepare and sell Change to a plural noun
portions
foods
respectively.Consequently
,some financial problems will be solved in these communities.For example
,in the US the Macdonald resturants
are one of the best Correct your spelling
restaurants
opportunity
for Fix the agreement mistake
opportunities
people
who look for Add an article
a job
job
.
Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
On the other hand
,some of these meals
are oily and salty which are not healthy and lead to some health issues.Heart disease has raised in modern countries compare
to countries Wrong verb form
compared
which
Correct pronoun usage
that
consuming
less fast Wrong verb form
consume
foods
.Fix the agreement mistake
food
Moreover
,obesity is one of the common health problems in western nations that related
to fatty Add a missing verb
is related
foods
.Additionally
,people
's lifestyle changed in families who eat more restaurant meal
,often they are not at home and do not eat Fix the agreement mistake
meals
meals
at time
and with their families.For Add an article
a time
this
Correct determiner usage
these
reasons
.eating prepared Fix the agreement mistake
reason
foods
have detrimental effects on individuals well-being.
In conclusion,in fast pace world
individuals are busy with their work or study and Add a comma
,world
cook
homemade Wrong verb form
cooking
meals
are difficult for many which inclined them to eat these unhealthy foods
.If authorities pay attention to standardize
Wrong verb form
standardizing
non homemade
Add a hyphen
non-homemade
foods
in order to decrease salt and oil in them ,they will be healther
for citizens.Educating students at schools Correct your spelling
healthier
improve
young Add the particle
to improve
people
knowledgeable
about Replace the word
knowledge
foods
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