You looked after a friend’s house while he/she was away on holidays. While you were there, you broke one of the windows. Write to your friend. In the letter, Explain what happened Apologise for breaking the window Say how you are going to fix the issue

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Dear Priya, I hope you are enjoying your vacation with your family and friends. I'm writing to inform you that I had damaged one of the living room windows. Let me explain

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in detail. Yesterday, when I tried to close the window which was very hard to move so I had tried forcefully to lock it. Unfortunately, the glass on the window door was broken. I would like to say sorry,

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, it was not my fault because the window was struck and tried to lock it to protect your house from robbers. Please accept my apologies.

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, in return, I had informed a carpenter to fix the glass right away. By the time you return from your holiday, it would be fixed perfectly. Once again, I'm sorry for the inconvenience caused. Please don't worry as I had already taken care of the damage. Enjoy your holidays with safe and fun. See you soon. Best wishes, Jeevitha.S

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