In every city the car is king of the road.cars cause death and injury and air pollution, and they make life difficult and dangerous for others.It is time to reduce the number of cars in our cities and to encourage other means of transport.do you agree with this opinion?

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source of transportation for everyone in day-to-day life.we will have
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many disadvantages
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.that cause accidents and air pollution will increase.I strongly believe that
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we should encourage
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other means of transport rather than using
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,
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should increase the public
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transport
facilities.They should keep the fares affordable and buses should arrive on time
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should increase the number of buses.
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,they should introduce the new rules and legislation on
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of the
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should be only one
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one family.By taking
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collection.
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,by taking the vehicles on road by following the even and odd sequence.by applying
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technique we can control the pollution.Apart from
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,the life period of
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.
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taken out
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from
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should run on the road only ten years not more than that. In the areas of cities
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distance or can travel by bicycles.from the early
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bicycle had used widely for sake of travelling.It is cheap and as well as ecofriendly. To
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that, we can replace the
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by taking in accordance of vehicles
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as bicycles and public transport And by applying some legislative rules,we can control the number of
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on roads.

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