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Internet is a great source of information and has opened-up opportunities for all people to learn all over the world. Is all information reliable on the internet? What could be done to control the information online.

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Nowadays, people, around the globe, search the internet to find out
information
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 that they need in their everyday life. I believe that all the
data
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 accessed through google is not reliable
however
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 all kinds of advice are available
in
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 the
web
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. In
this
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 essay, I will discuss why the messages provided by all the
websites
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is
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 not genuine and how we can keep control of the incorrect
data
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 that we may gain from the online world. To commence with, everyone ranging from governments to business
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education
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health
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welfare agencies have their own
websites
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 through which they divulge different types of
data
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 to
public
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the public
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/
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clients.
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, many scammers and fraudulent people
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 run their own
websites
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 which are intended to rip off people through false
message
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messages
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.
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, when we search for
a particular
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particular information
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information
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in
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 the
web
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, the name of too many
websites
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 pops up on our screen at the same time. We have difficulty finding out which
website
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 can provide
right
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the right
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information
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. If we cannot identify the genuine
website
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, we may receive
wrong
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the wrong
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information
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. We can save
us
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ourselves
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 from receiving misleading
data
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 by searching the
website
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 of a particular organisation that we are looking for.
Nevertheless
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, too many
web
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 addresses with similar
name
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names
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 open at the same time, we can choose the right
website
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 by reading
correct
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the correct
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web-address
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 of the organisation and opening it.
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information
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. To conclude,
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however
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 we depend on the internet for learning or receiving knowledge, we should be aware of the false
information
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 that we may acquire from the
web
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. We can take control of all that by sticking to the genuine service providers’
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website
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websites
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.
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